Nooooo...Ben don't slit your wrists again...You're doing so good, you don't need to be sad Ben, whoever this girl is you like, isn't worth your tears...I bet you could find someone who would make you smile and laugh all the time, you just got to keep looking...If you just sit and cry then that's not doing much, you got to go find her because maybe she's doing the same thing (Sitting and cryng)......This poem was really well written...Flowed well and was really sad and deep...I hope you are alright hun...love you xxxx <3 |
by Ben
Its about no one, i was just bored, im not slitting my wrist, dont worry. |
by TrUtH hUrTs
look ben..it was a nice poem...but ive seen better work frm u....this is sorta cliched u know...the whole idea...but anyway u were bored.....and this is a good way to get rid of boredom..keep writing:) |
by courtney
hey no one should make you feel this way about yourself!!! no one is worth hurting yourself because of. the only thing that should matter is your own opinion and that has to be strong because you have to be able to believe that you are so much better and worth so much more... ok i am rambling... sry... i liked your poem a lot though... great job |
by jennifer
This was an absolutly amazing piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it. |