Prophecy

by Luke   Oct 25, 2004


I dream of you,
I dream of me,
I dream of how this all should be,
I hope for dreams of you

I wish for this,
I wish for that,
My life exists
In your past,
But you will never know how I feel

I am right,
I am fair,
Shall I die?
Or live for fear

Can this fail?
Will I slide?
What can fix
The shattered mind?

My heart is gone,
There is an ache,
An empty hole,
None left to take

I look in the mirror,
I see your pain,
All of my efforts,
Shall not be in vain!

In the light
I stand alone,
My skin pressed tightly to the bone,
I see this all so clear

Dream I may,
Dream I might,
Dream of you so still,
A fear of sleep awakes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Excellent poem!! It was filled with so much emotion! I especially liked the stanza:
    My heart is gone,
    There is an ache,
    An empty hole,
    None left to take

    This was such a great poem! I absolutely loved it! 5/5***

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like how you brought back part of the begining in the last stanza. "In the light
    I stand alone,
    My skin pressed tightly to the bone," sounded really cool too! great job! I like how it flows well even though the rhyming doesnt follow through the whole poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Different, very freely written. Seems definetely like thoughts on paper... heh.. well soon I am gunna run out of your poems to comment on, though they all are very good. Keep writing - you should always know that I will keep reading!

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    WoW, Soo interesting, really awesome writting, I luv it..Keep it up! 5outta5 for sure
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    Oh my word, lol
    I loved it, your flow was great i never stumbled and your writing is a unique style that is awsome....
    take care 5/5
    scooby

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