cool poem, *mwah* x)

Another Great poem

Hey i like this one - just as i like all your others. You have a great talent! :)

This is very different! I am not sure what I think of it. I had to read it over to make sense of it. Not bad but not one of my favorites of yours sorry. ~Brooke~

i like this poem. i've never really had an interest in this genre, but this one really really captured me. i like the story this poem conveys. good job!

nice poem...and this is wierd, but I love the green border when I read poems about nature...GREEN KICKS ASS....

This one is my favorite. I think it had the best thought process, and really comes across strong. Like I said in the last comment, it is about life, adult life, where the innocence is gone. I am wondering if you have any poems that don't rhyme. Just so I can read them

haha lmao steve is cool... anyways i think it was really good...