just because it doesnt rhyme doesnt mean its not a poem. as long as it means something to you, its the best poem ever written! and may i say, this is lovely!

very nice, forget the normal poem, this one is great!

rhyming doesn't make a good poem, its the feeling and thoughts you put into it :) This piece is just ever so beautifully written, it shows it came from the heart. hmmm.... how do you do it?? I've always wanted to write a poem like this one :( but I've always failed... oh wel, maybe one day :)... Keep up the good work, take care :)