Hi Jackie, I think I have seen this man before, he lives on most street corners in the U.S.A., i feel like I was walking by him reading this. Thank you so much for your lovely comment on my last poem, it was muchly appreciated. Tim

very cool. simplistic, direct, an edge of sad sentiment

This was rather sad, i really pity the man because he has all these people around him but the only person he wants isn't there if u get what i mean. Once again a rather unique poem. Great job. tc. xmollyxx

btw, you need to change the typo "women" to woman

this poem was very good, it's like you painted a picture with your words...good job!!