by Aymon F Oct 25, 2004
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
*I know, this is even touchier than my other one on religion, so please, tell me what you think, good and bad input, but don not rate me with your bias* |
sorry, did i just say debut? i meant second. |
aymon, aymon, aymon... |
by Aymon F
wow how are you going to advertise your crap on a comment for my poem? Geez, some people. Anyways, yes i know it was for transition. But that means that its complete bull. Like being twofaced, saying one thign to please a person, and saying another to please yet another person. |
youre definitely missing the point...i mean i dont understand the releveance: |
by Jacki
i gave this poem a 5 because this is the type of stuff i've been trying to tell people for along time. You really captured everything in it. I hope you don't get to much slack for this because I thought it was great! |