Torn

by Manda   Oct 25, 2004


Torn by a broken life,
Torn by the wars and strifes.
Torn for a 1,000 years,
Torn by 1,000 tears.
Torn in a million pieces,
Torn for a million reasons.
Torn in my own world,
Torn like a little girl.
Torn by just one guy,
Torn by all the lies.
Torn all by myself,
Torn with everybody else.
Torn at my own home,
Torn when I'm all alone.
Torn by all my friends,
Torn until the end.
All I am is torn,
My body being so worn,
I'm just torn.

[I love this poem to death! I wrote it today in school. The first to lines just popped in my head and would not go away so I wrote a poem based on them. Please Vote & Comment.]

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  • 20 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    I like it. If anyone tells you that there are too many "torn's" in it, slap them! no not really, but if they do they are wrong! very nice poem! 5!