Wow this had alot of emotion to it.....i really love this poem...i think this is my favorite right now...u really now how to reach someone with your words and never question if you are a bad poet because i am telling you the honest to God truth, u are really gifted and if you stick with ur writing i think u could really go somewhere with it...

WOW. I really like this poem!! One thing tho...I think in the 4th stanza there may be a typo in the 3rd line. But it's great!