that is really good and kind of scary i really like it, did u make that up, or was it a personal experence to you or someone else. I really liked that it gave me the chills i really hope that if you are thinking of commiting suicide plz dont it hurts everone you love i kno i tried it and it really made me think so keep on wrighting. Love ya Mary

wow. excellent job, that was awesome, but really sad? is it true? besides the dying part? well anyways, it was awesome, keep up the good work

Wow, that was a very very very good poem, it was sad, but very good!

wow that was a beautiful poem i really like it if that is true than except the dieing part that he deserves to feel all the pain that he caused you keep up the good work keep your head up!

wow that was a beautiful poem i really like it if that is true than except the dieing part that he deserves to feel all the pain that he caused you keep up the good work keep your head up!

Hang in there its not worth it for a piece of shit like that. If he changed and you see it, work things out.
If not send his ass to jail he'll get some love from the inmates in there.

By the way was that made up or did it really happened. Either ways its a an excellent poem of reality.

wow that was so sad and touching , if this really happened i know howu feal i was raped too, but this poem brought a tear to my eye i mean wow keep it up

if this is true. i really feel 4 you. a great heart felt poem.

hey ya hunny...........well dune your work is truely emotional.........im sorry if tht rele happened 2 u........xxxx
its hrd 2 write about this things and let people you dont evan know reading them to........thnks 4 sharing such a emotional poem xx ill b looking 4 more of your wrk well dune xx
take care hunny (keep in tuch if u like)
xxx~ Natasha ~xxx

damn gurl keep it up good job

Hey Thanks Everyone For Voting And Commenting... I Really Appriciate It...

Wow, that was... wow, that was unbelievable. Great job man. I look forward to reading any other poems you may have. 5!

OMG! It was so good...but so sad! I hope that was not a true story...well, keep writing...if you ever wanna talk email me ok? besos2ufrmme@yahoo.com
~Val~

thanks for the comments...

congratulations,, that was a really good poem, cept sad,, you are very talented

OMG this is so sad i give u a FIVE!!!! Great Job Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, I love the ending of this story. It's really good all together though. Awesome work. <3333

wowww great poem gave me chills as i read on... i hope your ok now... czu what he did was f uckin wrong.. 5/5

Amazing poem. It was very well-written! Good job!

~BJ~