My [Life...]

by Luke   Oct 26, 2004


EARLY 2004

Inspiration comes and goes,
[Never on time…]
Ignored and hated,
My faults seem to rhyme,

No one will ever see,
[See me for who I am…]
I am not myself today,
Today I’m one of them

Talk to me,
Or walk away,
Leave me alone,
[Please let me stay…]

Another mocks and taunts,
Insult or silence in tone,
No one knows my feelings,
[So fragile…] Flesh without bone

A needle called ‘Ignorance,’
Stabs through my chest,
The pain of knowing what,
[No one knows…] Who is the best?

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    OMG! I loved this one! It was VERY good! You are so talented! I'm putting you on my favorites! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Wowzers, now that's great use of wording! Loved at the brackets, gave a nice tone to it. Great, great, great poem! Damn you have talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Nice, but what is up with all the bracets? Trying to make it look pretty? Haha.

  • 20 years ago

    by Krete

    Faults always seem to rhyme. Very nice poem.

    [Submit this!!!]

  • 20 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    I loved the last stanza. i thought it was very deep. i think throughout the poem your trying to convey how difficult it is to be accepted for who you are and the only time people take notice of you is when you act like them, like the masses, the sheep. very deep poem, i really enjoyed it. take care. xmollyxx

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