wow that is so well written...and so passionate and lovely...you did an amazing job describing this poem and making it amazing...i couldpicture it well...beautiful work xxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

thank you mort... this was kinda a spur of the moment poem....i just was sittin around and I thought of it...I thought it turned out well and I'm glad that you do too...

i can feel the passion arising in this poem with your words. great job!

That poem is awsome, like ive always said, your one of the best poets i know, and i love u lots, oh see u soon. lol
Ashley

That poem is awsome, like ive always said, your one of the best poets i know, and i love u lots, oh see u soon. lol
Ashley

Wow, i'm really impressed. I never pictures this one coming out of you considering you always write depressing poems...lol. but ya-this one is soo good! OOOOH!! and i know what it's about you naughty person you!!! lol j/p. well i love ya! laterz!!!

-Sierra Rae

Very good hun I love it very nice poem if you have the time please comment on my poem its called the wind is blowing and its in the catergory I love you! Thanks a billion

Sexy and addictive, but edged with tenderness... great poem. Takes you through a passionate encounter in those heady days of initial "contact."

Wow, great rhyming and yet another excellent poem! I really enjoyed that, i'm going to put you in my favourites too coz i really like your style!
luv kt.

Very passionate and very well written !!!! congrats
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