Touch me....
No...
Not like that.
There is so much time for that!

this is gonna sound wierd but when I read this part, I kinda pictured someone slapping another's hand....you know, like a "STOP DOING THAT" kinda slap...im wierd..i know..but i really did like this poem..great job!

Broken, that's exactly the feel I was going for in those first few lines. Strangely enough this poem started out in my mind as a humorous poem and slowly shifted, right about the fifth line.

I've actually always pondered whether or not I should remove those first few lines and just begin with "Touch me..." Any ideas?