DEATH BECOMES ME

by Razorblade Lies   Oct 26, 2004


I can't see your face
I can't kiss your lips
I can't be here anymore
Death becomes me

I can't take this pain
I can't be angry much more
I can't keep trying
Death becomes me

I can't help but wonder
I can't help but cry
I can't help you now
Death becomes me

I can't stand these thoughts
I can't stand my mind
I can't be without you
Death becomes me

I can't wait anymore
I can't hurt any longer
I can't seem to get through
Death becomes me

I can't see the stars
I can't see the sky
I can't wait to DIE
DEATH BECOMES ME!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This is very well spoken but i don't like how it has death becomes me at the end of each paragraph to me i would've put it at the very end like after i was done writing all of it then say death becomes me but then i wouldn't i mean i like your way also but that's my thought of what i would've done but anyway you did an amazing job i really enjoyed reading it though you are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    This is great. I like it very much, good job!
    With love, K Kristina

  • 20 years ago

    by Razorblade Lies

    thank you

  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer

    This poem is amazing very well spoken

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