This poem is amazing very well spoken

thank you

This is great. I like it very much, good job!
With love, K Kristina

This is very well spoken but i don't like how it has death becomes me at the end of each paragraph to me i would've put it at the very end like after i was done writing all of it then say death becomes me but then i wouldn't i mean i like your way also but that's my thought of what i would've done but anyway you did an amazing job i really enjoyed reading it though you are very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.