by DooDee Oct 26, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Baby , u are kind , handsome , and sweet .. |
Well written, I liked it a lot. When trying to convey a message like this, it seems almost childish to use couplets. Thats just my two cents though. |
by Lexi Lou
awesome! truly great! loved it! very well written! keep in touch |
by BlackRose
i sincerely love your poem... i felt as if you were talking to me when you mentioned the hazel eyes... im a sucker for good eyes... anyway keep up the good work *wink* toodles |