WOW. this is brilliant. it is very deep and so sad. i can't tell how many times i've felt like giving up trying to be an individual and just becoming like everyone else. i thought you were giving up because it is easier to be like everyone else so the last two lines came unexpectedly. i was suprised by them and saddened as well. it horrible when you feel like someone close to you has given up on you or abandoned you. btw: 1) your on my favorites, 2) that is a picture of me in my profile, 3) thanks for the comments about both my poem and appearance :) take care. xmollyxx

wow, lol thanks

omg!! MARRY ME!! lol. i was thinkin "wat an idiot..." all the way thru that poem till the last cupl of lines n then i was like aawwwwwwww i luv u!!! lol. ur a gr8 poet!!
luv,
sarah
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