by Kristy Hall Oct 27, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Scream the things you cannot mention |
by Manda
I like your Poem, even though generally I don't find Short Poems very interesting. Only thing is, you're breaking the rules by using Profanity in your Poem. You should write it longer, and it'd be better. My Poem "Love Game", is based on, from what I see, the same thing this is. |