by Unseen Exposure Oct 27, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Twirling hair around my finger |
by !Chookie!
WOAH! thats a great poem! I wish i could write like that, its a shame that it had to be based on a death of whom you love though. I'll pray for your family. Just keep up the work. |
by pinkalias
beautiful....i love how you wrote this about someone who was important to you and how you made it a sad poem abut a poem that also sort of sai its alright it was time, we can move on. lovely job, im sure if she could see it she would be so proud |
by Luvmeluvr
Brought a tear to my eye. Just beautiful. |
by Broken
aww...*whipes tears from face* |
by Andrea
awww, very sweet poem! :) |