awww, very sweet poem! :)

aww...*whipes tears from face*

Brought a tear to my eye. Just beautiful.

beautiful....i love how you wrote this about someone who was important to you and how you made it a sad poem abut a poem that also sort of sai its alright it was time, we can move on. lovely job, im sure if she could see it she would be so proud

WOAH! thats a great poem! I wish i could write like that, its a shame that it had to be based on a death of whom you love though. I'll pray for your family. Just keep up the work.