*~*Brandon*~*
Excellent poem that you've written
I really enjoyed it:)
Keep on writing:D!!! Check some of mine if you have anytime:)!!! Take Care & Good Luck *Brandon* :)

**SEDUSHA <3**

I would have liked this poem if it was written by somebody else. This is too simple for you to write. There are only few poets on this site with a classic and distinguished style. This poem is good but not classic unlike most of your other works. I hope you won't take me in a negative way... You are one of the poet whom i admire the most on this site.

Thanks Trincy, I appreciate your honesty. It's not my usual style, it's just how I've felt lately. Sometimes creativity can get wrapped up by other, more pressing, emotions.

awesome! i loved it! you have true talent! keep in touch!
lexi lou