by .x.PorteR.x. Oct 27, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She stared in the mirror, quickly |
by Andrea
excellent poem! but now i wonder, what will be the worse to come? |
by ~Tamara~
I Loved Your Peom....!!! It Was Very deep...if you like reading peoms like these you shoul look at mine... |
by Alya
Nice poem...seem to be a common theme..the razor and all...but still very nice of course. |
by Gracie Jo
Wow!!! An excellent poem! It was all written so well and the ending was the best part! I loved your whole idea of titling it "destruction" too... because that is so true. What a destruction. Anyway, I'm babbling :-) lol... great work! Take care and keep writing! |
The flow kindaa got lost but you put it back together in the end..so i really like it and it's so personal |