I really feel this poem very deep. It's beautiful in such a dark way. I love it.

Wow, you used some very impressive flow in the first two stanza's...it started to weaken towards the end....but nice effort....especailly with such a personal poem.

If this is factual and based on your life...then good luck with tackling the issue...some of my friends have problems with self harm...i actually wrote a poem about it called "Wholeness"..

Be strong and gentle if you can. Reality is worth the effort. Strive to be happy.

The flow kindaa got lost but you put it back together in the end..so i really like it and it's so personal

go gal go

Wow!!! An excellent poem! It was all written so well and the ending was the best part! I loved your whole idea of titling it "destruction" too... because that is so true. What a destruction. Anyway, I'm babbling :-) lol... great work! Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

Nice poem...seem to be a common theme..the razor and all...but still very nice of course.

I Loved Your Peom....!!! It Was Very deep...if you like reading peoms like these you shoul look at mine...

excellent poem! but now i wonder, what will be the worse to come?