An interesting poem. Well done! =)

I just wanted to thank you for your honest comment on my latest poem. I tried to speak it out loud and realized what you did. It did sound broken. I did some re-working on it, I hope it helps. But anyway, thank you. =)

~Grace

moving piece right here... i liked it... hope u pass by my site again.... my creation needs honest critique ... thou im not as good as them.. but i think u'll enjoy reading them =)
much love
***letishia***