Hey amira thank you for your comment! You are so sweet as well don't worry I will keep this writing up! It sux that you and I had to go through all this! But they say it only makes you better in the end! I will take good care of myself...and I hope that you do the very same thing!!! If you write any new poems make sure to tell me!! I love your work!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tyson thanks for the comment! That was really nice of you!

I read your poem and wanted to cry. My boyfriend and I are going through some rough stuff right now. Well I broke up with him so he really isn't my boyfriend but any way ...When we first got together when I was 15 I left all my friends alone. I couldn't go out or do anything. He just wouldn't let me. And now I do and he hates it, when I get home he tells me he knows I'm with someone else and blah blah. This was so weird, I felt like I was reading about me and him. Wow, very good poem.

after reading myour poem i feel loads better bout me n my boyfriends break up, its great and i wanted 2 thank you
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WOW thank you! It makes me feel so good inside to know that I have been able to touch people! It sucks to love someone so much and realize they don't really feel the same that you do! Pls read my other poem ( HE WAS OUT OF LOVE ) I hope that you also enjoy it! Thank you! God bless everyone of you!!
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Thanks ZackyPoo

Great poem... I loved it!

awesome ending! it's my favorite part of the entire poem

Thanks I tried...