by Unseen Exposure Oct 27, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
One last rose |
by Kayla Marie
I really loved this one well acutally I love all your work but this one I favor |
by Ashley
ggod job, I think you kind of over used the words One Last, but it does have very touching vocabulary, and it flows smoothly, keep it up! |
very good job, very deep and full of emotion, I really like this one, keep it up |
well dune........this poem is brilliant...............u rele now ur way with words.....truely emotional well dune keep up the excellet work looking 4wrd 2 reading more of ur wrk xx TaShA xx |
I luv this...this is truely amazing..... |