I luv this...this is truely amazing.....

well dune........this poem is brilliant...............u rele now ur way with words.....truely emotional well dune keep up the excellet work looking 4wrd 2 reading more of ur wrk xx TaShA xx

very good job, very deep and full of emotion, I really like this one, keep it up

ggod job, I think you kind of over used the words One Last, but it does have very touching vocabulary, and it flows smoothly, keep it up!

I really loved this one well acutally I love all your work but this one I favor