Fallen

by ~Bloodied&Broken   Oct 28, 2004


The tears still fall
From her lonely face
She feels nothing
Except her dying race

She falls ever deeper
Into the pain filled ache
Struggling but weaker
Her death she wants to make

All the pain consumes
The cutting goes deep
One fallen notion
One struggled leap

Fallen…

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  • 20 years ago

    by Lisa

    you earned a 5.. good job

  • 20 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Wow, such a brilliant poem, short, lovely rhyming, lovely theme, lovely point of view... lovely :)

  • 20 years ago

    by loosing grip

    this is really good!!!