i agree, you did a great job on this one...keep writing what you feel and it may take yoou somewhere in life!

i agree, you did a great job on this one...keep writing what you feel and it may take yoou somewhere in life!

ahhh sorry about that...i hit it twice!

i thought that it was wondeful and well thought out for someone who wrote it during class. i always did that and they never sounded good to me, but my friends always loved them and they wont tell me why and i dont think they ever will.

thnxs. its easier riting a poem wen ur emotions are flyin all over the p[lace. if i was to try and rite a poem now it wood be rubbish because i feeling generally ok. bu if i am reall down or really happy its best then coz it helps express wot i'm try to say:)

keep look out more peoms coming soon. i proud of the feedback i recieved so i mite put a nother one on here soon!! :)

oh rite well it was good either way! :)