Hey, this is pretty good D. Heh, u play some slow song and not something u made k?

Aken Sol

hey wats shaking....that poem was really sweet...is your mom dying or something??If you ever wanna talk email me at stephanie_sweetie_28@hotmail.com or add me on messanger k

omg..you have really great poems...this one had me in tears..keep up the good work.!!! great job!!

great poem! it was very heart felt. keep up the great work! God Bless

OMG.. I love this poem...it really touched my heart and made me cry..I felt my throat closing up while tears started runnin down my face...I can truly feel ur pain and relate to it..If u ever need 2 talk to anyon..I'm here 4 u.. Kisstrawberry69@aol.com...by readin ur poems we have a lot in comment

This was a great poem! keep it up. this really had me in tears, i can relate soo much to this...i love my mom more than anything in the world and don't want her to leave...but good job...

Luv this coment
u almost made me cry.
ha:)

Very good writing, I enjoyed reading your poem.

Wow..amazing poems.. i love it alot...very deep and heartfelt...very well written...great job~*~CIndy~*~

Must have love your mum that much huh... the hairs of my hands were raising as i read through your poem... honestly and literally... lol

Awesome writing. i love this. really makes me think about my mom. haha