by SCARECROW Oct 29, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I had a mad desire to slit my wrists, all thanks to Sin, so instead I wrote this. Before I got shoved into an asylum. By the way, all you poeple who comment on my stuff (you know who you are) I love you guys so much! You totally rock! |
by BrokenMisery
Graet Job. Dark and some very nice phrases and rhymes. Keep it up! |
omg thats so deep....great job...i loved it! 5/5 very depressing... |
by Clarity
HMMMM... Your poem is real... It has a quality of realness, that you usually don't find, Its disturbing, yet unique.... |
by Carrie
hey tiff great stuff remeber sin is trash well thats what i think wish tat arshole who keeps goin on bout struture to your poems would shut up EMMONTIONS DONT HAVE STRUCTURE SO WHY SHOULD POEMS THAT ARE FULL OF EMMONTION HAVE STRUCTURE YOU HEARTLESS FOOL!!!!! ok now that i have that off my chest lol c ya lata tiff luvin your stuff keep writin |
by Amilo
Darkly beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this poem... |