Amaizing...And gez wat i am dumstruck too!!!

Wee even i got a desire to slit my throat but i wrote chimera instead...

We are pretty alike!!

Awesome poem, it flowed nicely and was very well worded. P.S. I saw your comment on the message board about people not liking to be critiqued. Just so you know, you are more than welcome to read mine and tear them apart, i like honest feedback...

definate 5...very deep, well done

wow this is very deep. i love it!

Beautiful. Really reaches out to me, love every word of it. Can't think of any thing else to write in this stupid comment box about it because my words don't begin to describe your talent girl! i can't understand how you get to such an amazing level of talent!

wow...wut can i say, this is amazing. i absolutly love the imagery and graphic effects that you used.

"Abandoned even by my shadow
for the night has hungrily devoured it's flesh."
i really liked that line, abandoned by your own shadow, it has so much meaning and really helps the reader to understand the abandonment and neglect that the writer is feeling. i also like how you compared it to crucifixtion, very depp and meaningful. fantastic job, amazing.

*p.s....i had read some of your comments on other people's poetry and i really like your views and style of praise. your a true poet.

you shoudn't end your life...i have been there and i am still there *i am on meds for it*. Your a gifted person, you should try to apply yourself to something else...i know that someone who writes something on the internet to you isn't going to have much of an impact on your life...but the answers never lay in that knife.

Please put down the knife and continue to write poems...it is better for you and better for everyone around you, if you don't know it..there are people who care.

Your poem was amazing...but i would prefer never to have to read something like it again by anyone...but life has it's ups and downs...unfortunately something got you really down enough to write your poem and want to kill yourself.

Be well Be safe...

So, anyone up for a friendly game of Russian roullette?

You know, despite the fact that it sounds massively suicidal, I genuinely enjoyed this poem. I liked the lines:

"Carving my sorrows onto the hollow
in the flesh of my soul."

Beautifully phrased, well done.

-paperdoll

wow, that way a kick ass poem you got here! awesome job, maybe one of the best depressing poems I've read on here. awesome job! i know everyone says this, but I REALLY mean it, keep it up!
-Cheerfully Cynical

Large words! I like. Wow look at my vocabulary. Haha.. anywho, I'm jealous of your great writing! You really do have a talent at this. Nothing is wrong, keep up the good work.

hi there...think this is an awesome poem because: I think any poem is great that conveys emotion like yours does!! DEF. does!!! and that helps the reader to vent feelings and especially if it helped you tonot hurt yourself..so I do, indeed think it's a great poem..that said, I'm not big on the 'dark' stuff..more into love poems myself so probably wont be reading a lot more(*PLEASE dont be offended that's just ME!) but you ARE talented, please keep writing!!! :) luv MIchelle

Darkly beautiful! I really enjoyed reading this poem...

stanza two line two, it's should be its.

hey tiff great stuff remeber sin is trash well thats what i think wish tat arshole who keeps goin on bout struture to your poems would shut up EMMONTIONS DONT HAVE STRUCTURE SO WHY SHOULD POEMS THAT ARE FULL OF EMMONTION HAVE STRUCTURE YOU HEARTLESS FOOL!!!!! ok now that i have that off my chest lol c ya lata tiff luvin your stuff keep writin

HMMMM... Your poem is real... It has a quality of realness, that you usually don't find, Its disturbing, yet unique....

omg thats so deep....great job...i loved it! 5/5 very depressing...

Graet Job. Dark and some very nice phrases and rhymes. Keep it up!