Very nicely done, this would make a great song :) I really felt what you're saying in this poem/song... *sigh* sometimes I just feel like... oh wait, boys don't cry... err... I guess that means Im a man, not a boy ;):D:D:D But yeah, this is a really good piece of writing... :) I found the copyright thing really cute ;) Anyway, are you going to add music to it????

Beautiful poem...Very touching and heartfelt....take care....FIVE>>>