by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg Oct 30, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The one I guarded was now gone, |
by pinkalias
i'll admit some of the lines in the stances were weak, but i loved the ending lines in each stance. great rhyming technique and format, pretty good, |
by vanessarrr
loved the rhyme scheme. this gives me an image of an angel looking for whoever he was supposed to be guarding. *shrugs* excellent poem. take care:) |