This is such a great poem... I'm crying... Its very sad but seriously good.. My brother has been in Iraq twice and going in another week for the 3rd time... I'm really sorry about your loss..

omg im sorry, i hope that is just something you thought of and never happened to you...

o ya ps this is chrisgj001

Hey my girl...where'd all your poems go? This is a very sad one, very! Keep in touch yeah.
Take care always, Your friend

;;^^Kalah

Lol please forgive me, this new feature is really confusing me =D lol never the less nice poem girl.
Take care always,

;;^^Kalah

WOw this is really good... definitely a 5... keep up the awesome work!

xx, PorteR

ps - thx for the comment on my poem =)

This is such a great poem it really is,its also very sad but still very,very good.

Omg... Tears are streaming down my face... That poem is so sad! Thank your for recomending it!! It's wonderful!!! a 5 out of 5, and i appoligize i cannot give it a higher rating.. its so awsome.. so sad, your poem made me cry, and thats an instant spot on my favorites list, thank you so much for this recomendation, i'll read all the other poems you mentioned. wonderful, awsome superb job!! This poem is among the best i've read!!

Wow. That poem is so powerful, such strong words. There's so much emotion in it. Definatly a 5/5. Keep up the good work!
-_-;; Ash~

aw....that was sad: ( it made me think of my brother...he is in Iraq right now, he has been there since last august....I'd be lost if something ever happened to him....anyhow, great job.