Comments : Unfinished Portrait II

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    incredible, i love it! amazing job writing this poem!

  • 20 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    mm...well Agatha christie honestly...

  • 20 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    hmmm very creatively written....scintillating use of words..very deep ..pulls you into the narration...oh ok it's just AWESOME!!...amen!(harumph i bet ur ego bloated up another inch rite now!!)

  • 20 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    ego...I dont have a ego!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    yeah rite!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    no serious....you know who has pricked my ego and left me feelin like a deflated ballon...aahhh!!!! forget it i ROCK!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    shuuudup
    narcissist,egotist,hedonist....
    when did i ever manage to do tht?? prick ur ego???? does such a phenomenon exist??.

  • 20 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    okk wait...some 1 else???? who??? TELL ME(but don't call! )

  • Hey! I was chocked up after reading this Prose! Wow! What a language..! You made me dumb-struck! I think i didn't even blink while reading this! I read the first part of this.. but i was not that impressed. This one just took my breath away. I know i am repeating the same sentence in different ways.. But thats what happened with me. I too love Agatha Christie's work and i have read almost every of his work. But why i was never inspired to write like you???????? HA! This is really a genius work! I give you a 10 for this.(if that was possible :) )

    Trincy.

  • 20 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    his work??? agatha christie's a female sister

  • 20 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent Poem, Keep Up The Good Work. Check Mine Out If You Have The Chance