by FTS Miles Oct 31, 2004
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
My only illumination |
by FTS Miles
I'm going to have to think about how to rework things. Thank you, Fisherman. Much appreciated. :) |
by Fisherman
No suggestions beyond sticking to the line you so skillfully plotted earlier in the poem. Reviewing your poem helped me w/ one of mine where my ending was aa little out of sync. |
by FTS Miles
Actually, Fisherman, I completely understand. I wasn't completely comfortable with them myself. Any suggestions for their improvement? |
by Fisherman
I was spell bound until the laat few lines which were a bit disappointing. |
by Jacki
i really enjoyed it, i wish more people would reconize the beuty in the nature poems. It seems they always get rated the lowest :( sighs, but anyways i really liked the descrptions of this poem. Good Job |