Well, I like to email people and thank them for their comments (constructive or otherwise), but unfortunately your profile does not allow contact.

So I suppose I will thank you for your comments here, and hope that others don't feel this poem is as valueless as did you... and that those who have read it and enjoyed it don't get too insulted by your insinuation regarding them as readers.

Whoa... I like your detailed descriptions, but unfortunately I'm one of those people who can only read so much big words at a time. :)

No problem, Mario. Thanks for coming back. Please understand, I don't mind at all critiques... but the negativity gave me more than a bit of pause.

Anyway... enjoy the evil heart. Might be some good poetry in it. ;)

And then we'll all enjoy reading it. :)

i really enjoyed it, i wish more people would reconize the beuty in the nature poems. It seems they always get rated the lowest :( sighs, but anyways i really liked the descrptions of this poem. Good Job

I was spell bound until the laat few lines which were a bit disappointing.

Actually, Fisherman, I completely understand. I wasn't completely comfortable with them myself. Any suggestions for their improvement?

No suggestions beyond sticking to the line you so skillfully plotted earlier in the poem. Reviewing your poem helped me w/ one of mine where my ending was aa little out of sync.

I'm going to have to think about how to rework things. Thank you, Fisherman. Much appreciated. :)