Comments : Can You..

  • 20 years ago

    by LoSt

    great poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Toni

    Hi! Amazing poem!!! You are such a great writer! Keep writing no matter how bad you think your poems are. the best poems come from the heart and this one is just that.

    If u want, hav a look at sum of my poems, they are pretty similar to yours, im not sure if they are as gud as urs tho!!

    Love Toni xx

  • 20 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    This is an excellent poem! You are an AMAZING writer!! If you ever need any body to talk to, i'm here. I actually know how you feel believe it or not! Just e-mail me at any given time, and i'll try and help you!! *Hugz n kissez*
    Peace
    Sam

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    What are you talking about this not being good?! This is amazing! I absolutly loved it!! So well put and so deep and full of emotion...absolutly incredible, I'd say! I especially loved this verse:
    "Can you see my pain,
    Or my scarred arms?
    Do you know all the times,
    I've resorted to self-harm?"

    I can relate quite well...to that part, and all of the poem...I feel so invisible, and by your words, I'd say you might too?...Anyways...brilliant poem, love. Amazing work. :) xxxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 20 years ago

    by Armed-Alcoholic

    Umm thx guyz who commented on my poem ur really nice even tho this poem is kinda bad

  • 20 years ago

    by Carrie

    Hey,
    Wow I am a huge HUGE fan of your poems! They mean alot to me. To know I'm not alone in this pain. Never think you are unimportant, cause to me you are so IMPORTANT!!! PLZ e-mail me if you ever need to talk! I truly wanna help! I don't want to see someone like you having to feel this way! My e-mail addy is cuttieprincess2631@juno.com ! Hope to hear from you soon! Luv yas!

    -Carrie