by Jonny Oct 31, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My brother , where are you in the time of need or grief. When I think that I could have been their for you and help you out . Even when I think about it you wouldn\'t let me pass through all of that black darkness surrounding your heart of good and brightness. I tried to help when god frowned upon your hatred deeds from the past , but I was still there for you , and you knew that. |
by Jonny
Thank you all for the great comments , I was told my poem was long. I beleive if you dont want to read it because it is too long then you are not a good poem writer , you dont have any heart. Cause all poems have the special gift of knowledge and emotion. So if you think it is too long then you shouldnt have the privilage of even reading my poem. |
by Gabby
that was a great poem...it was very moving. you're an awesome writer. keep it up...hury and submit more... :) |
by ashleigh
jonny, you are an awesome writer, and im sure that everyone can i agree with me. keep it up!!you have major talent |
by Jonny
I am dedicated to peom writing and all I ask is for all of you to vote the truth |