My Lost Brother

by Jonny   Oct 31, 2004


My brother , where are you in the time of need or grief. When I think that I could have been their for you and help you out . Even when I think about it you wouldn\'t let me pass through all of that black darkness surrounding your heart of good and brightness. I tried to help when god frowned upon your hatred deeds from the past , but I was still there for you , and you knew that.

When I knocked on that black steel door , the sound it made was so awful because it was locked with the persons sorrow and hatred inside of it. When I knocked and Knocked and knocked no one answered not even thy brother that was inside of it. Though I could not hear crying or yelling inside the darkened room behind the door , I felt it like a Earthquake came upon god himself.

When I felt this I only knew that it was my time to go ,to flee from this hatred place of Evil , and darkness. I thought in my mind brothers could share everything , but it was the other way around brothers could share anything , at least these two brothers could share at least not one thing.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Jonny

    Thank you all for the great comments , I was told my poem was long. I beleive if you dont want to read it because it is too long then you are not a good poem writer , you dont have any heart. Cause all poems have the special gift of knowledge and emotion. So if you think it is too long then you shouldnt have the privilage of even reading my poem.

    But thanks to all of you who did like my poem and did not think it was long. Please keeping voting and telling me feel how you feel about the peom

  • 20 years ago

    by Gabby

    that was a great poem...it was very moving. you're an awesome writer. keep it up...hury and submit more... :)

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    by ashleigh

    jonny, you are an awesome writer, and im sure that everyone can i agree with me. keep it up!!you have major talent

    ~ashleigh

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    by Jonny

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