wow! ur a great poet!
wonderful! n the ending it works so well
keep it up

thanks for all your comments. i liked this poem, good job!

Oh this was so very lovely! and so very dark, right up the alleyway to my favorite reading. I thought your rythym was wonderful, as well as your wording. I give you a 5/5 ^_^

this is a great poem...this is my fav so far, out of the ones i've read.. keep it up!! :) take care.

Caustic yet lovely. You, once again, sculpt a pretty incubus. I repeat; Lovely.