I personally don't like girls opting for abortion...how can we kill a life...it's just horrible...Very nice poem but sad though...take care....FIVE>>> |
by Allen
Great poem, I, like Kumar, dislike abortion, I think its somewhat wrong to take a life :( but yeah, people have different and strong view on this issue... the poem was very nicely written, well placed I must say, in a sense politically correct ;) you pointed out the sadness yet respected the choice, good job :D k, Im gotta go back to my no life study now... take care :) |
by Chelsey
Oh my god!! That was amazing..i always had a strong opinion about that topic and i believe abortions should NOT be allowed..and this poem showed so much ...the way you expressed yourself..well the child really..it was just amazing...you did a wonderfu job with this i hope you have a alot of votes as well as comments..this poem was amazing! |
by Bizarre
This is a really good poem because I don't care for abortion at all. To answer all the stupid peoples questions if they baby can feel the pain, yes it can! And if you don't want the baby, the least you could do is give it a life and give it up for adoption once it's born. There are tons of people out there who want children but aren't able, so think about them and not about yourself....that's just my opinion anyway. |
by yup
Great poem. Really thought provoking, makes you wonder is it right to take a life? Anyway awesome work! |
good poem i liked it ......ALOT!! it's bangin |
by candy
excellent poem. i am very agaisnt abortion. it really helped me more than you'll know. i found out yesterday that im pregnant(im 14) and though im against abortion, th father is in favor and has been trying to convince me to get an abortion...this poem has just confirmed my belief, and no matter what he says, i will no kill my baby...thank you so much, you probly just saved a life. |
everybodys misinterprtating my poem, im saying there are two sides to abortion, that though abortion is wrong in some cases is necassary.....ahh i give up, thnk wat u lyk |
everybodys misinterprtating my poem, im saying there are two sides to abortion, that though abortion is wrong in some cases is necassary.....ahh i give up, thnk wat u lyk |
by Eibutsina
Ok Alysse I became a teenage mother so I think you have a very valid point in this poem - i dont know if ppl realise the difficulty and pain you go thru bringing a child into the world when your a single mother, unable to financially or emotionally provide any sort stability for a child - not saying this is my case at all but it a fact for many young women finding themselves pregnant today...who is anyone else to judge what a woman does with her body and especially judge her for something that in reallity crushes a lot of women to do..is it more cruel to bring a child into a world where you cannot love it, cannot feed it, cannot put a roof over its head ir is it better to wait for a time in your life where you can offer a child all the wonderful things in life it deserves...I agree 100% with alysse yes to some of you abortion is wrong but in some cases it is necessary - think of the poor young rape victims who couldn't deal with abortion and now see the faces of their rapists in thier children everyday? I think its unfair of us to judge anyones situation that we ourselves have not yet walked in...let all have some love and repect for individuals rights to make decisions that affect there lives as much as it does the lives of their unborn children! |
by Kia
awesome poem, i hate abortion. i was adopted... and i think that makes me hate it more, to think that i could have been a number, not a child, jus another baby aborted and not given the chance to live. i believe that each child is a gift, you dont want the gift give it to someone else, you can bless someone else's life more than abortion will "help" you. people say that adoption is hard and it is... and you always wonder what happened to the child you gave up... but isnt it better that you gave him and gave him the chance to bless someone else's life and LIVE, and kill him before he had the change. Ok enough of that. awesome poem. |
by Jessy
I am so against abortions they are sooooo wrong!!!!!!!! nice poem |