that is mad, i loved it

Haha, I like it. I'm not sure if it's just because I'm a guy or not ;O)

holy shit!!! i love this poem. this turned me on when i read it. i'm not a lesbian but i'm bi. you got me thinkin about my friend who i think is totally hott. keep writing!~!!

Thats good Loved it!
good one
Sammi

it was good but baby i could give you much more than that if you gay

Very Good Poem & Hott:)...lol.. Great Job on the details and for making it deep:D Keep it up! God Bless you Heather!

*!*Sedusha*!*

OooOo, lololol, I likez that dream... woawhz....do you go the way? ... lol.. you must have liked the dream a lot to write a poem about it.. lol!! get back 2 me while you can.

CyN ;)

well im not bi or a lesbian or anything that some of the other girls were saying but that was intense!! nice work. you have talent!! great job, keep writing!
<3 Kyla

great work hunz :D

wow really good! very sexy and emotional! it shwos what you want and dream fro! really well written and like people have said it gets them hot, i can see why! lol! keep it up! luv ya, lucy x

Dude wow thats sooo freakin HOT im lez and yea thats an awsome dream!