Feeding off myself
ruining my health
necromance my heart
get it to restart
feeling...
breathing...
needing...
knowing...
finding...
breaking...
aching...
going...
I see your eyes
sense your lies
because of what you did wrong
now I am gone
I think you have an excellent talent.
It's very pulling. The words you use make you want to hear the rest. Some poems aren't good at that. That one is awesome. Check out some of my poems sometime.