hey it is amazing i like such poems thanx alot and keep it up

your poem made me cry! its really lovely, i know what you mean by the fall! it sux! and hurts like hell! well done!xx

great poem, that's like the real meaning of love. Cause all it dose is bring you happiness and later on ruin your entire life

hey awesome poem i like how you showed the good side of loce and then showed the bad side about love really good job on this!

take care ~lil slam~