by Jose Herrera Nov 2, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Your a red flower with spikes on the sides, that when I touch you I see my hand bleeding. You want to be with me but you hold yourself in just to figure out what I say is real. There is a secret that holds us apart but we both don't seem to know it. Is it the sun that shines upon you when your feeling lonely and sad. Or is it me who misses you wanting to be with you to love you, just to be by your side to know your alright. We will never find the secret to us, because love is already in us. Your life is like a river so silent and need. Your soul is like a secret that never could keep. When I look into your eyes I know that is true, god must has spent a little more time on you. Only god knows the unknown secret. Our secret has been unleashed, to be with each other, soul, body, and our life together not just forever but eternity. |
by Courtney Lee
hey, good job for the most part, but I don't know if you noticed, but one of your phrases is from one of backstreet boys' song. |