i could picture this! excellent poem, i love the opening stanza...well actually i love all of it!

thats really good

wow really good, I could picture what was goin on..keep it up^_^

wow, i couldn't beilve the ending what a twist! I really liked how you made it from the "grey ghost's" point of view instead of the childs. Then when I read the ending my jaw dropped what a creep lol. Anyways Great Job!!!

That is just brutal !!! Exellent man you did quite well very pleased take care and will talk to you soon ok

Very moving i ...i know how he feels...