heeeey gurl !
i looove ur poem !
its soooo amazing!!!
keep it up ! ;)
read mine,,,,and i hope ull like them !
c ya!
byeezz!

Very sweet and beautiful poem, it paints a movie in my mind :) you lucky girl, I wish the best with your man, :) keep up the good work, and take care :)

aww your poem is so sweet,
you are a really great writer

Aw such a sweet poem! i could totally imagine the scene in my head!! You must really have something special! i hope things stay that way!!! xxxxxxx

thanx alot for everyone that commented :D i really appreciate it :D and ur comments make me know my failures and successes :D u rock guys:D thanx