Nice job:) It really is sad though, but you put this into words so well. I also really liked your other one you had me look at, I think it was called In My Dreams. Great job and thanks for looking at my poems. |
by DooDee
really nice poem :D keep up the good work !! and thanx alot for commenting my poem ! and here i am commenting urs ! just like i promised ! take care and bye |
by Abbie
I like the way you have portrayed your feelings!! your a good writer, i've read a few of your other poems and i must say i was quite impressed!! keep up the good work! xxx |
I liked the way you expressed your anger in this one it's sad and it kinda makes every1 else hate him! Good job and keep it up:) |