wow...very deep, i love it!

Beautiful poem..very well written..Take care hun....xxxx
-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

scary!!! good idea! love it!!!
-muah!
--Sierra Rae

Ominous, caged, angry, defeated. Very nice!

wow thats deep i love it

Wow merrily, I loved it, So much raw emotion, and so deep. Oh yah and DAVID COMES HOME TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!

Wow merrily, I loved it, So much raw emotion, and so deep. Oh yah and DAVID COMES HOME TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!

hhmmm...thank you guys soo much...this is my fav poem that i've written...and it means alot that you guys have been givin good reviews...i accually really suprised it's stayed on the top rated list for this long...none of my other ones have...lol...well, like i said, thank you all....

WoOoOW! AMAAZING POEM !!
i reallly like it alooot!!!

that was amazing, im stuck with words... WOW, thats all i can say

Incredible.. I loved it!!!

I love this poem very creative....also explains my life well keep up the good work

I just wanna say thank u to all that voted and commented on this...

Cool. Well written, good words, perfect rhyming. Wonderful. I like that little poetry comment you put on you Bio. My reason too. It explains why some of us write what we do.

wow. your poems are truly magnificent. i liked this one a lot- dark, angst. very well written. keep writing! take care:)

Good poem. Not entirely perfect, nothing is, but stil good. Matches my tastes almost perfectly. well done.

Simply beautiful poem. Excellent job.

wow, that is AWSOME! no wonder it has 93 votes! that is just AWSOME! i really like your style of writing! its awsome and unique, you have a way with words! Keep it up!
luv kt

I like it when you write about death! You really let your emotions flow! I really liked it.

Great poem, keep up the good work;)

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