I like reading you8r work alot it shows alot of potential you just need time and work and you will do fine keep it up...

Great poem, i loved it. Keep it up!!

Hey, great job here... luv ur style/rhymin pattern.. i can also really relate to it.... nice work... keep it up! :)

*~peace and love~*

lol i can agree....your life at the moment is just as bad as mine...im totally there..lol...great poem...i gotcha...lol luv yas mwah

-kayla-

This is a really great poem, sad, but great. good job

Aww, Sweety. This is sad. I'm so sorry for the pain I feel. And I know this is hard to beleive, But even if you feel all alone. There is millions of people out there who feel the same as you. It took me awhile to realise that. But I do now. So keep your head high hun *hugs* 5/5

- Natalie x-x

Aw. This is sad. I must say, however, it was a great poem. I can relate to it, and feeling that way is no fun. I loved the words you used to describe things. This poem is amazing.

5/5.

The only answer you will ever find to "why" is "why not?"...its a question that is going to haunt us until the day we die, so its best that we don't seek answers...because sure we can find them, but that'll bring up another question to which we dont have a definite answer to...but I love how you used "why" as a concept throughout the entire poem, because as humans, that's all we really want to know..keep it up!